Феликс Аксёнцев ([info]felix_aksentsev) wrote,
'Ці' гучыць крыху няўпэўнена, мякка. Лепей 'Мо' замест 'Ды'.
Верш робіцца, бадай, крыху элегічным, але цьвёрдасьць погляду захоўваецца.

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